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Shadows move across the floor,
I don’t think I can do this anymore.
I put the barrel against my head,
Wishing I was as good as dead.
The door opens to reveal a man,
He tries to convince me I do what I can.
But all the words he speaks turn into lies,
They even bring tears to my lifeless eyes.
I tell him to get out of my way,
Or he won’t live to see another day.
He just grimaces and picks me up,
I argue but he tells me to just shut up.
He carries me bridal-style to a land far away,
To vacate me from this world that has been lead astray.
My head is clear once again,
And it is all thanks to that one strange man.
©2008-2009 ~babydragonlover
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Author's Comments

I dunno...I don't like the last two lines, I think. *shrugs* But I ran out of patience before I could try and make them rhyme. xD

Yup...when I was writing it at midnight last night, I had "Lost in Hollywood" by System of a Down stuck in my head...and Hollywood reminds me of Broadway and how hard it must be to try to get to the top...and stuff.

Yeah, nevermind.

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:icongingitsune-chan:
I liked it! xD It's so realistic, beautiful!

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Watch your back...it makes funnyfaces when you don't...
:iconbabydragonlover:
*gets all tear-y eyed* Really? Thank you.

Here. *gives a "Hello! My name is..." tag* :3

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They're coming for you.
:icongingitsune-chan:
You're welcome ;3

*writes Koinu-chan then sticks it on chair and sits down*

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Watch your back...it makes funnyfaces when you don't...
:iconbabydragonlover:
*rips it off chair and puts it on Koinu-chan's head* There.

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They're coming for you.
:icongingitsune-chan:
*walks with head pointed at people but is mostly shorter than everyone so they must squat to see name tag* 8D

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Watch your back...it makes funnyfaces when you don't...
:iconbabydragonlover:
*rips off name tag again, puts a nice tall hat on Koinu-chan, and reapplies the name tag near the top of the hat* :3

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They're coming for you.
:icongingitsune-chan:
*wobbles then falls down like a redwood on lots of party people*


D8|==============|

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Watch your back...it makes funnyfaces when you don't...
:iconbabydragonlover:
Um...um...*looks around* *gets a, um, lifty-uppy thingy...to lift up Koinu-chan's newly heavy head*

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They're coming for you.
:icongingitsune-chan:
A carjack?

*ish propped up then starts to dance*

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Watch your back...it makes funnyfaces when you don't...

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