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Notice Me by ~babydragonlover:iconbabydragonlover:

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I put another fake smile on and run downstairs to find another strange face.
Do they notice my laugh is hollow?
Do they notice my soul was killed inside?
Do they notice my eyes are no longer vibrant?

I keep continuing on with this empty façade and I can&'t stop what has begun.
Do you notice that my skin is pale?
Do you notice that my smile is no longer colorful?
Do you notice that my words do not fit me?

Everyday I plaster on a numbing shell and try to please everyone.
Do I notice that my happiness is faltering?
Do I notice that I stay awake all night?
Do I notice that I keep looking back?

I walk from place to place just to see things that aren't real and try to enjoy them.
Do they really care?
Do you really know everything about me?
Do I really know what I'm doing?
©2007-2009 ~babydragonlover
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Author's Comments

I was just about to walk downstairs while feeling depressed about somethings...then it just came to me...an epiphany...so I typed it before I returned to my voyage...

*edit* Spelling mistake caught by my buddy Zexy/Sora or whatever she wants to be called... ._.

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~KeybladeFoxsquirrel Nov 9, 2007, 1:51:20 PM
wow..i was listening to music while reading that and..*sniffle* i think i just had an emo moment ;_; im faveing this TwT

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Make love, not sense ^_^!
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~babydragonlover Nov 9, 2007, 5:38:40 PM
Thank you. *hugs* We'll be emo for a moment...TOGETHER! 'Cause being emo is always better with a buddy...That's what Leon says... x3

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They're coming for you.
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~Malistryxia Nov 9, 2007, 7:57:07 PM
aweosme... as much as i hate to say it depressing poetry always seems to be the most powerful and holds the most meaning... ^^

and uh just wonder do ya mean "no longer vibrant"? cuz " no long vibrant" sounds kinda odd... *scratches head*

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A verbal contract isn't worth the paper it's written on ~ Samuel Goldwyn
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~babydragonlover Nov 9, 2007, 9:07:08 PM
Yush...

Oh...yeah..probably. ^^' I'll change it later...*is lazy*

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They're coming for you.
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~Malistryxia Nov 9, 2007, 9:22:36 PM
lol... oki...

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A verbal contract isn't worth the paper it's written on ~ Samuel Goldwyn
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~KeybladeFoxsquirrel Nov 9, 2007, 11:04:12 PM
and leon quotes rok X3

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Make love, not sense ^_^!
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~Raistlhoff Nov 11, 2007, 5:55:34 PM
ididnt know you had such talent XD!
PS-i miss you

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'Just because you call an electric eel a rubber duck doesn't make it a rubber duck, does it? And god help the poor bastard who decides they want to take a bath with the duckie.'

~City of Bones, by Cassandra Clare
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~babydragonlover Nov 11, 2007, 7:34:24 PM
Thanks... :3

I miss you too! *hugs* I think all of us should get together one day after school...or during the summer. xD How is your new school?

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They're coming for you.
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~Raistlhoff Nov 13, 2007, 2:56:21 PM
Ok.... kinda. if i had my way, i'd have been back at riverview in august!

PS i'm going to ask my parants for a B-day party XD!!

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'Just because you call an electric eel a rubber duck doesn't make it a rubber duck, does it? And god help the poor bastard who decides they want to take a bath with the duckie.'

~City of Bones, by Cassandra Clare
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